Presented at the 2022nd sessionWritingPromotion of classes: good speech, performance
The term “good words” means the right, flexible, diverse and creative applicationHow to say itI don't know. “apparently” is the correct use of the term when it should be used, “flexible and diverse”, i. E., mundane and self-absorbed, while “innovated” refers to novelty and non-fiction. As for the “expression of words”, it should be understood in two ways: firstly, the richness of ideas and emotions, i. E., the genuineness of words, the richness of philosophy and the longness of rhymes; and secondly, the image of words, i. E., the expression of the state, nature or behaviour of the person, etc., through vivid words。
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1. Advantage in the use of rhetorical techniques
It happens to use a variety of methods of speech, which can be abstracted to be specific, dry to be vivid and linguistically expressive. Using a rhetorical approach, candidates should note the following: (1) the line is a beautiful view of the writing, which, regardless of the style, can be enhanced by the proper application of the contrast, and can be read with a sense of power. (2) excellent metaphors can add colour to the full text. The metaphor is called the flower of the language and art, which helps to reason and depict, and also adds more fun and more content. (3) the decrepit is an important means of making a living. (a) draws people into their hearts, which can be used to write images and make them more visible; it can be used to express philosophy and to bring it into harmony with humanity; it can also be used to reflect the human mind。
2. Expressions are strong
All successful essays at the entrance examination are spoken in attractive languages. A good theme, a good material, a good angle, and without good language, everything will end up at the conceptual stage. In order for the words to be “active”, candidates should strive to: (1) use the words carefully. "all poems must be written on paper, not on paper." in order to make the words clear, candidates should, to the extent possible, use words that mobilize the reader's sense experience to write scenery and expression, with particular emphasis on the use of verbs and adjectives. (2) try to make a difference. The language in which things are written must be specific and imaged, and the author of the narrative should avoid using abstract words and choose as much as possible as possible to use graphicly explicit statements. For example, “it's completely overloading, like a good thing to change”, which is more abstract; and shakespeare wrote, "plating for refined gold, painting for lilies and spilling perfume over the violet," as well as "drawing." (3) statements express a personalized style. Candidates should learn to regulate etiquette, to use myths in an unconscionable manner, so as to demonstrate their personality, to express or simplify their language, or to enrich their poetry。
Writing
Read the material below and write as required。
There is a story in lu's spring autumn that says: "what is it that is left of a man and of a man and of a man?" and confucius says, "go to hell." the old saying, "go to hell." so the old man goes to the public。
Students read the story and discussed it. A student believes that it is normal for people to judge when they are close to each other, that the bows and arrows of the human being are found, and that the fat water is not flowing into the fields of the human being. B student believes that confucius values the instrumentality of things, so long as he uses them to the best of his ability, he does not need to be caught in the hands of the human being or a foreigner. C. I think that i see the arrows as coming from the heavens and the earth, and eventually going into the heavens and the earth, and that they are the philosophy of “physical self”。
What did these three students say to you? Please write an article on your experience and feelings。
Requirements: select the angle, define the meaning, clarify the style, and draw the title; do not pose, do not copy and do not divulge personal information; not less than 600 words。
Fanvin shows one
Do all things according to their nature
The view of this story in lu's spring autumn is that the kind and the wise see the wise. If we think more rationally, i think we should do something about it。
And the way of man comes, and the dead are the spring. Dowson one, two, two, three, all. He explained that he had left his bow behind because he “remained it and earned it”. If you don't pick them up, you want them back? A man is judged by proximity, but i think it's better to “take things in and take things in”. There are so many things that we have encountered in our lives that, if we have to struggle with each other, many good things in the world will pass by us. The trees of spring, summer, autumn and winter are dying and reborn year after year, and even if the frost is so good, everything we give and lose comes back in another way. When the dead wood comes to spring, when everything comes to the tide, when we sail, the world will be clearer and more lovely。
The way of the world, by its nature, the luminous. The law of man, the law of heaven, the law of heaven, the law of nature. Confucius believes that “persons will be left behind”. This is the instrumental aspect of what is being done, so long as it is used to the best of its ability, it is not to be held hostage to anyone else. However, in the special scenario of the battlefield, one of the most lethal weapons in the entire army becomes the key to success and cannot be easily lost; if our forces fail, we must destroy our weapons, even at sacrifice, and never leave them to our enemies. In this way, there is a gap in confucius ' view, and the instrumentality of the visible does not apply to this situation. So the old man went to work and said, "fuck you." it means that things come from and return to the heavens and the earth, and that my opinion is no longer confined to the earth or to man. It is also natural that we should face this world, when the sun shines and the bright trees bloom。
And the way of the heavens and the earth, and all things shall be brought together, and the former wooded spring. Everything is born out of the roots of all things and is united against one another. I think that bows and arrows come from and go back to the heavens and the earth, and that they are the philosophy of “the body of the person”. Man is as small as dust compared to the vast universe, and the bow and arrows are the dust of dust, insignificant and worthless. I put everything in the world in a word, in spring and summer, and leaves in autumn and winter. Everything follows the laws of nature. And we can be submissive, we can be submissive, we can be submissive, and we can be submissive. As for those who have the heavens and the earth, their hearts are wide open, and the logs are ploughed with fertile soil, and they are made into spring。
The way of the human being, the way of the world, the way of the heavens and the earth are all a measure of our hearts. And by the law, and by its nature, we shall embrace the flowers and meet with the spring in the warm sun。
Point evaluation
This article addresses the reasons for the lack of access to the material and points to the idea of “the road”. Artificial writings are graphic, using metaphors, idiosyncrasies, etc., to reveal natural patterns and laws through the atrophy of wood。
Fan man show ii
The buddha must be moderate
In the story of the dead, the dead, the confucius and the old are in favor of not looking, that is, they are all buddhist. But their buddhas are different, with less buddhas and more buddhas. To me, confucius buddhas are modest。
The buddhists cannot be partially optimistic, they cannot just seek to comfort themselves. In the eyes of the human being, the bow that he has thrown will be used by the human being, and we are all a nation, so we do not have to look for it. It is common to look at the issue in the light of the recent distance. But i think it's just a consolation. After all, the bow isn't necessarily picked up by someone. He's too small a buddhist. Unlike the dangers that are directly visible in the troubled world, this “partial optimism” and the hidden problems posed by self-deception will continue to stir up the nerve of the human being, with disturbing consequences。
The buddhist system cannot “stand off the coast” to make ideas lazy. I think that the loss of the bow is a return to nature, that the bow was born of nature, and that it is better to return to nature now, so i don't have to look for it, which is the philosophy of “personality”. This perception is far too buddhist, leaving everything behind and losing its head. Once this mentality is rooted in the heart, it becomes lazy. And it's as difficult to pull out as trying to move a mountain. If we do not want to be crushed, we must recognize the dangers of this ideology and let it be “quick”。
The buddhist system should be properly offered, i. E. Given. Confucius believes that it is okay to lose the bow, as long as someone can find it and make good use of it so that it can create its own value. It's a tool-oriented view, and it's only for the best. I think that a buddhist system such as confucius is the most appropriate one, with optimism and without a lack of positive motivation. It is also a matter of giving away — and of giving up one's own interests for the benefit of society. And let it be, let it be, and let it be. As shelley said, "if you overwhelm your feathers and do not cause any damage to them, you will lose two wings and never fly again." learn to let go of their will and desire, and learn to give up so that they can have the lightness of life and live even more. We must avoid falling into a situation of self-pity or self-deception。
When difficulties are encountered, we need to understand the logic of viewing as a mountain. To look at the problem in the right light, to learn to moderate the buddhist system, to remove “partial optimism”, to break the cocoon of the fire on the shore, to learn to live with it, to laugh at clouds and clouds。
Point evaluation
The writing was broken and the correctness of confucius ' view was demonstrated by rebutting the views of both men and women. It is clever to use internet popular languages, such as “buddhists”, to keep language alive while being philosophical。
