A lot of friends like to read and write poetry. However, a general problem is that many poetic friends do not know much about poetry or how to write it. Most of the poems they write are emotional, emotional and natural, which is a very simple branch. If strictly required, many of the poems written by friends are not mature in poetry techniques, and neither language nor perception nor opinion have yet met the standards of fine poetry。
Let's read chen's poem, "no more."
Mom's cooking tasks/not much, not much -/ only one dish and one soup. // the slides/slightly distributed by the science and technology teacher are not much -/only five small requests. / information/supplied by psci teachers/supplied/supplied/supplier/supplied. / and normal/not much, not much / up to 9:30. / .../ not much, not much, not much / but together / it's tarzan / we can't breathe。
As a young author, the poems of the first four sections as a whole seem to be quite good, and it is certain that the author is aware of life and can express himself quite naturally. But there is still a gap if we look at it from the linguistic point of view of poetry. If you read it carefully, you will find the poem in all the narratives, only the events, nothing, and there is no rhyme between each section. That way, the poetry tastes like shit. It's better to have a rhythm and a sense of purpose, but also to remind readers of a picture, a very harmonious and warm atmosphere. If a poem is full of great words, whoever records it, divides it into poetry
If you read poetry often, you know that, generally speaking, the language of poetry consists of four general words: one of love, one of impression, one of philosophy and one of narrative。
Words of love are the words of poetry that are very narcissistic, making it clear to readers that poets are very committed and pious. It's like suh zhimo's language, but it's mostly a linguistic language, because the whole poem gives people a chute of love, and the clue to the poem is the poet's affection for kang qi。
The first two lines of the poem "your name" of the chinese poet's chronology are very poignant and express the devout love of the poet for his lover:
It's the lightest voice in the world
Call your name gently every night。
The dawn notice of aqing is also very generous. Read its first three sections:
For my prayers
Poet, get up
And please tell them
Said what they were waiting for was coming
Says i'm on my way
The last star has been drawn
It can be seen that the poet's tone is an invitation to engage in dialogue with others with a very strong sense of subjectivity, which we do not even care about when we read, but it captures our hearts。
Some of the poems that are called "image language " are mostly poetry that wins with an image, and one that contains a central image or a chain of images that allows readers to feel the beauty of the image even better than their emotions. For example, i've written myself a little poem called "the flowers."
There's a whole stomach full of jokes
As soon as she talks
And spring will laugh
There's only one thing about this little poem: "flores." the poem uses the mantra, comparing "flower buds" to a lively, funny, dynamic and happy girl. This poem, of course, is an expression of my love for the good things of spring, but it is published and loved by the reader, i think, because it is interesting and surprising. Poetry in the sense of language requires poets to be very observational and sensitive to external things and to be able to express its beauty and convey its hymn in very clever words. I've been very careful in my daily life to observe, and i've been very careful about the changes in little life, and i've felt their spirits, so i've written a lot of these poems。
There are, of course, poetic languages that are both deliberately picturing and emotional, which are well combined. Here's the little poet von yoline:
The drop of dew on the grass leaves
It's actually a tear
Jing
Exact
Friends
You're leaving
That's for you
It's a separate gift
Although..
I'm laughing to bless you
♪ but i can't stop ♪
It's supposed to be a very good pictural poem, but it's also a love poem. The first four lines should be the language of the impression that the poets see the dew on the leaves as their own teardrops, an impression that makes lifeless natural things lovers and thus easy to impress on the reader. In the next seven lines, it's supposed to be a romantic language. But. The last three sentences could be deleted, since the previous words had been filled with tears of separation, so it was not necessary to say, in plain words, “the heart has been indifferent”。
The philosophical language of the poems refers mainly to some poems, mainly to convey the poet's rational thinking and philosophical views and express the poet's vision and judgement of the world, life and life. As is known to all of us, " the ones " , express poets ' values and visions of life in contrast, in the language of triage and even hype。
We all know that it's "the break of the seal"
You stand on the bridge and watch the view
Look at the viewers upstairs watching you。
The moon decorated your window
Decorate other people's dreams。
It is not a poem of love, of course it is intentional, but it is mainly the beauty of philosophy that inspires readers to think rationally. A lot of people may think that philosophy is the easiest to write, but it's called for a high standard of poets, like the break. First, poets have a lot of life experience and a deep understanding of life. At the same time, he also has the ability to convey sense in the vague language of image. Some poems, some of them, have a philosophy, but they lack a sense of taste and a space to resonate, and they actually use big ideas to make poetry. A young man writes poetry, and a lot of people like to write about life, but learning poetry at the beginning of the year, i would suggest that you write less philosophies and more poetry and more poetry。
Some poetry is mostly descriptive. For example, "three generations" of the zeke family is also a famous little poem, which is somewhat philosophical but mainly descriptive:
Boy
And bathe in the earth
Dad
And sweat in the earth
Grandpa
Buried in the earth。
You see, in this poem, the poet tells three generations of life in the most practical and concise language, describing the different lives of three generations. And you may find that the clue to this poem is not emotion, not philosophy, but time. Poetry, mainly in descriptive languages, often gives readers a clear concept of time, and also expresses a sense of time and space. To write poetry in descriptive language, the most taboo is that it is only a narrative, that it is only a story, that it is only a recollection, and that it is not a reference or an impression. That is to say, even in the case of narratives, try to bring the reader to a unique situation where the reader feels — when he reads poetry — that he enters a space of time that is different from reality. The poem of chen shui, referred to earlier, is not much, but a little more dramatic. To be honest, it's not enough。
The space is limited, and there is much to say about poetry. In conclusion, i would like to share with you a little experience, not to be too eager to publish a poem, but to put it on the table, give it a few serious reviews and modify it。
Rain brought me some poems, and if you look at the authors of those poems, you can tell me a lot. Here, take a poem and tell us about the modification。
This poem is called bird and blue sky:
Blue sky
It's the bird's fifth line. Spectrum
Birdie
The greatest pianist in the blue sky
Ask
It's all about paper
Who dares play
This poem is half a success, half a failure. I suggest deleting the following three lines. Why? If it's in the first four lines, it's beautiful and beautiful. However, the next three lines are rather abrupt, one being that the tone is wrong and that there is no involvement of the subject, so let there be no sudden questioning of the strong tone; and the other because the meaning of the latter is also contradictory. The blue sky is the bird's five-line spectrum. But after that, who dares to talk
Anyway, writing poetry requires more practice. More awareness, more description, more refining. I believe that more and more readers will love to write, read and be great poets
How to write a modern poem
Modern poetry is a very challenging form of literature that is more diverse in its presentation and language than traditional poetry, with a greater focus on the integration of the elements of realism and modernism. This paper presents the following key points to help you write an excellent modern poem。
1. Finding the theme that makes you happy
Good modern poetry requires a profound reflection of modern society and culture, covering a wide range of topics such as social issues, political issues, religious beliefs, interpersonal relations, etc. You can look for inspiration in everyday events and events, find themes that shock, impress or think, or try to express your beliefs and ideas through your feelings, experience or attitude。
2. Positioning languages and formats
Unlike traditional hymns, modern poetry focuses more on liberal and innovative terminology and structures. When creating, the language and form should be able to convey the feelings and themes you want to express. You can try to express your thoughts and feelings using new vocabulary, grammar and unique language styles。
3. Use of sentences, rhythms and rhythms
The language rhythm of modern poetry is very free, and you can use different language elements to create powerful rhythms and extensions. Moreover, modern poetry could contain a language form centred on non-linear structures. This form not only stimulates imagination but also makes poetry more free and lively。
Use of appropriate rhetorical techniques
Modern poetry can employ a variety of techniques, such as metaphors, terminologies, cross-examination, metaphors, rankings, symbols and exaggerations. You can use these tools to strengthen the language and visual effects of poetry, making it deeper and more interesting。
5. Continuing progress in practice
Finally, writing a modern poem requires constant practice and experimentation. You can write a number of different works to enhance your ability and skills in the expression of poetry, while keeping an in-depth and critical view of the concerns and understanding of linguistic, cultural and social issues。
In short, modern poetry is often closely linked to times and cultures, requiring great imagination and insight into current social problems. In the creation of modern poetry, it is necessary to find its own creative style and characteristics, as well as effective language expressions and rhetorical techniques, in order to create outstanding works。
