"teaching goal."
1. Proficiency in the six main types of common speech disease
2. Improved ability to modify pathological sentences in diagnosis
Teaching process
I. Improper language
1. Sorting of multiple qualifiers
Rule: is a numerical kinetic name+。
1 she is an excellent basketball instructor in the national team with more than 20 years of teaching experience。
2. Order of multiple statements
Rule: object time and place of destination, frequency range, emotional object。
In an effort to express gratitude, the missing two had yesterday taken up a song on television for xiao zhao。
3. Inverted position of fixed or written language and centre language here
In previous years, the city had issued a ban on the sale of large quantities of sugary beverages, such as supermarkets, cinemas and deli-food stores。
4. Misallocation of stereotypes and narratives
Teachers should play their full role in the classroom。
Inappropriate location of associated terms
Rule: associated words “same as before”。
Some platforms are improving the efficiency of the entire agricultural supply chain by reducing unnecessary intermediates, and users can not only enjoy lower prices and fresher agricultural products, but can also promote higher incomes for farmers and improved production through reinvestment。
Modification: replace the words “not only” with the words “not only”。
6. Parallel phrases are not logical
The promulgation of document no. 1 has allowed us to do everything in the country for the benefit of farmers, for the benefit of the countryside, for the enhancement of agriculture, and for the persistence of ideas, policies and reforms。
Revision: replace the words “for farmers, for rural areas, for agricultural strengthening” with the words “for strengthening agriculture, for rural areas and for farmers”。
7. Inappropriate order of passages
Rule: be logical and consider the echoes。
It is written that the mother is “the loving mother and the strict father” and that she has a unique quality: she knows not only how to teach children to be human but also how to love them。
Ii. Inadequate matching
1. Mismatching of the main title
The viewer follows the ideal-friendly programme, looking back at scientific and technological processes, understanding the creativity of scientists, grasping the pulse of the times, and stimulating the momentum for progress, which is well received。
2. Inadequate matchmaking
Recently, the ministry of public security, in conjunction with the main media sites, has continued to launch a series of anti-fraud reports, continuously enhancing social awareness, expanding awareness-raising precision, building a community-based and social-wide information system and creating a common social anti-fraud movement。
3. It would be useful to consider changing the word or the guest language in the context of the overall meaning of the paragraph。
The 3 hangzhou asian mascot nudity 3d promotional film, which vividly displays three sports scenes of football, sailboats and electric competition, is an important technique for achieving the asian mascot's “bracking out of the circle” that brings to the audience the experience of being present at its borders。
Revision: add the main phrase “the eye 3d” before “achievement” to match “critical technologies”。
4. Mismatching of qualifiers with central words
The great resonance of the series " trades and crafts of the great " , the spirit of excellence and selfless dedication of the craftsmen, has generated extensive and lively discussion and reflection。
Revision: replace the words “a broad and lively discussion and reflection” with the words “a broad and lively discussion and deep reflection”。
5. Inappropriate alignment of terms
The chinese believe that the chinese identity is not biological, but cultural and spiritual; without chinese culture, the chinese will not be chinese and the chinese will not be chinese。
Analysis: “not” goes with “but”。
6. Improper pairing of faces
[note] when faced with a combination of two sides, sometimes it's right and sometimes it's wrong, read the following two sentences:
The overall layout of the 6-1 campus, the environmental health of the classroom, the learning status of the students, the spiritual enthusiasm of the teacher ... Influence the effectiveness of learning。
The good and poor investment climate, the quality of services and the quality of public servants are important guarantees for the healthy economic development of the region。
Iii. Component difficulties or difficulties
(i) discrepancies
1. Main language gaps
One to one, by learning how to cook and cook, also enhances students ' understanding and awareness of domestic work and helps them to be more understanding, grateful and shared with their families。
The first and second is serious and honest: “the more you are young, the more you have blood, the more you are old, the less you will admit you are old.”
Analysis: in the first case, the abuse of the medium led to the absence of the principal, the word “through” was deleted and the words “learning to cook and cook” were added after the word “helping”; the words “they” or “students” were added. Before the second main phrase, “persons”, the words “the younger they are, the more they are” are too long。
2. Deficiencies
In recent years, artistic works of fine quality and positive value orientation, such as lake nagasaki's " way back " , have been widely recognized by the audience, amply proving that hard quality is a fundamental condition for cultural leadership in the new era。
Revision: add “with” before “of fine artistic quality”。
3. Bilingual disability
Pulmonary fish is also an important “activated fossil” whose fossil records have been better maintained throughout the history of the earth and whose physical structure has changed continuously from the sea to the terrestrial freshwater environment。
Revision: add the words “adaptation process” at the end of the sentence as a guest word for “demonstration”。
4. Deficiencies
Scientists need to be open-minded, and their counterparts, who are not in line with their academic views, should be honest and cooperate with them。
Modification: insert the word “right” after the word “is”。
(ii) material redundancy
1. Duplication of terms
The cross-straits relations association held its last preparatory consultations with the channel exchange foundation, which lasted about one hour and discussed and reached consensus on many details。
Modify: "about" contradicts "more" and deletes one. (there are also those who attribute this type to the “irregular” category
2. Duplication
This issue involves many aspects, including wildlife research, geographic surveys, environmental protection, sustainable development and global climate change monitoring, which should be considered in the long term。
Modification: delete the word “to” after the word “related”。
Iv. Structure
I'm just saying
Parameters: combination of two sentences expressing the same meaning in a single sentence, where the end of the sentence does not end, which is a mistake。
The law on vocational education was enacted with the aim of promoting the recognition of vocational education, deepening the integration of maternity education, school cooperation, improving the vocational education security system and measures, and better promoting the development of quality vocational education。
Analysis: combining the structure of the terms “aimed at raising the level of recognition for vocational education” and “aimed at raising the level of recognition for vocational education”, both can be used as terms and one can be used。
2. Cross-roads (speeching of the dominant language)
Parameters: the first sentence is not finished, and the next sentence is changed. Or we'll talk in half, and suddenly we'll just have another stove, another subject or topic。
The first clear picture of a super-black hole in human history has finally appeared this year, drawing widespread attention to the fact that more than 200 scientists around the world have gone through a joint cross-border offensive and years of tireless efforts。
Analysis: the first phrase is “scientists” and the second phrase becomes “black hole photographs”. Moves the word “passed” to the beginning of the sentence so that the first sentence becomes a full sentence。
3. Disconnected threads (continuous)
Parameters: the structure of the preceding sentence is complete, but the latter half of it is used as the beginning of the next sentence, i. E., an inappropriate combination of what should have been two sentences in one sentence, leading to errors。
The royal shakespeare arts director lamented quincy's beautiful singer and actor skill, and the fine costumes of quincy and a simple stage design struck an excellent balance。
Changes: "praise" only goes to "stage design"... And should end here. After the "stage design" break, add a comma and after the word "formation", insert the words "considers these two"。
[note] this often happens in both words, as in the case of “dressing” and “designing”. Sometimes it's right, sometimes it's wrong. It's a little hard. Please judge the following two examples:
- you ask director wong to report to the reporting office for the third and second graders。
— in the evening, the whistling wind came with heavy rain。
[the revelation] encounters a verb with a verb, and if the verb behind the verb is not influenced by the first verb, it is right to give a direct action instruction, as in the first sentence of the previous example; if it is still subject to the verb preceding the verb, it is wrong, as in the second sentence of the previous example。
V. Ignorance
1. Suspend unknown
One mountain of precious water, we leave it to the people who come at night。
Analysis: “late/come up” does not mean “night/come”。
2. Undefined meaning
The stock of imported seeds is safe and our work is absolutely first-class。
Analysis: “detention” has two meanings: assurance, security/storage and management。
3. Undefined relationships
This 3-1 film, which tells the story of the daughter of a highly ill worker struggling with her destiny, is very educational for the young audience。
The new spring party in our school, 2024, was a very successful event, with three school leaders watching their fellow students and giving them full credit。
Analysis: “a worker's daughter” after “a serious illness” is the subject of two objects: “a worker's daughter”. The second two targets, “school leaders”, are “three school leaders”。
4. Undefined structure (uncertain division of sentence components)
Japan’s opposition party has strongly accused the treasury minister of “shutlessness” and it is highly irresponsible to speak publicly about the government’s invasion of the japanese yen last year。
The main phrase: “is extremely irresponsible” is not certain, either “the japanese opposition strongly blames” or “acts”。
Change: please change the sentence above to three consecutive short sentences to make it clear. (3 minutes)
Answer: last year, the japanese government intervened in the specific japanese yen exchange rate, which was openly spoken of by the treasury minister “without a word” and the opposition strongly accused the treasury minister of being extremely irresponsible。
5. Unknown
The 5-1 exit from the south gate of our school, four and a half paces east of the school, has a round hill that is high and flat. According to the old man at the time, the japanese were stationed on the hill。
It is not easy to appreciate a good poem, and it is not easy to create a good poem. Little li is unique to poetry, so he usually does a lot of work in this area。
Revision: in the first sentence, replace the word “this” with the word “that” and in the second sentence replace the word “this” with the words “to create poetry”。
Vi. Illegitimate
1. The imposition of logical relations
One-one teachers have been teaching four consecutive sessions and are too tired to go back to the office and have had two consecutive drinks。
While the bulk of the group's funds were raised from outside, with high interest rates, the group was under increasing pressure to operate。
Analysis: “tired” and “drinking water” have no necessary causal logic and cannot be associated with “so”. The “high interest” and “high pressure” relationships are causal, not converse, and the “however” is removed。
2. Logical confusion
2-1 our newspapers, magazines, television, networks and all publications have a greater responsibility to lead by example, to eliminate word irregularities and to promote a normative sense of word use。
The 2-2 community service centre prepared 19 sports activities for the children, including jump ropes, badmintons, puzzles, singing and dancing, which enriched their extracurricular life。
Analysis: “the press, the magazine” is a “publication” with different levels and cannot be considered in parallel. The puzzle is an intellectual game, and the singing is a recreational activity, both of which are not “sporting activities”。
3. Contradiction
Many of those who have been successful in scientific and academic research have been successful through tenacious efforts, despite difficult objective material conditions。
In recent years, awareness of ecological conservation has gained ground, so that when socio-economic development conflicts with forest land conservation management, some places tend to weigh the former。
Analysis: “any” and “many” indicate a range. For the former read the latter。
4. Rejection of misconduct
This year, on the eve of the “five ones” labour day, the commission issued an urgent circular prohibiting air conditioners and distributors from engaging in unfair competition by means of price warfare。
In the winter of beijing, 4-2 vegetables are transported from the south, from growers to wholesalers and distributors, and there are many links between them
The “prohibited” “not to be” “unjustly” denied three times, contrary to the actual meaning. The phrase “does not fail” twice, and the phrase “reversely rejects once”, which is equivalent to three denials, is “ensures that there is no omission”, contrary to the original phrase, “cannot guarantee that there is no omission”。
Main object inverted
He does not normally like to read, nor do he say foreign writings such as " the old man and the sea " , even the red house dream " the land of china " , which he has never read, and it can be said that there are few opportunities for contacts with him。
Analysis: in the last sentence, “fame” is the object and “he” is the subject, and the two are reversed。
6. Unjustification
Experts agreed on the importance of minimizing the harmful effects of tobacco, in particular by discouraging young smokers, in preventing lung cancer and other respiratory diseases。
Analysis: young people quit smoking is a good thing, and they can only “construct” and not “stop”。
7. Improper use of quantitative terms
7 nanchang to shanghai and hangzhou, respectively, offer $228 and $179, while the corresponding rates are $106 and $81 for the ordinary train, compared to more than twice as low。
Analysis: indicating a reduction without multiples, only fractions can be used, and the word “twice” should be replaced by the word “half”。
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